Well done Emily.
+Good focus on the use of titling and institutional information.
– However you could focus more sharply on the use of typography in the titles, as well as the positioning of the text against the black screen. When do these occur? What is their purpose?
– No. 4&5 doesn’t correlate to the question
– For no.8 you don’t actually mention what the soundbridge is.
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Well done Emily.
+Good focus on the use of titling and institutional information.
– However you could focus more sharply on the use of typography in the titles, as well as the positioning of the text against the black screen. When do these occur? What is their purpose?
– No. 4&5 doesn’t correlate to the question
– For no.8 you don’t actually mention what the soundbridge is.
I have done the changes miss. If there is anything else I can do to improve it would you mind letting me know and I will make sure I change it. 🙂
Excellent amendments Emily.
Just for your ref: demarcates